Bandit

This is my story and iI hope you like it. 
      My name is Kelly and I have a brown Alaskan 
Malamute. Bandit, was the puppie of my other dog 
named Raven. Two days after Ravens puppies were born 
I had already fell in love with Bandit. One day when 
I came home from school I went straight to to garage 
to see Bandit. When I got there I did not see Bandit 
in the pile of about 15 puppies. I looked everywhere 
for her but could not find her. Then I lifted up Ravens 
tail and found Bandit with Ravens hair wraped around 
her head. She was turning blue, so I acted quickly to 
untangle her. About five minutes after I cut her loose 
she returned to her normal color and went back to eating. 
I am very lucky that I found Bandit in time otherwise I 
might not be so lucky as to have her today. Eventhough the 
best dog in the world, Raven, died last summer bandit has 
been able to move on with her life and is now expecting 
puppies of her own.